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It's been five generations after the first war between Samurai and Shinobi. The five villages were founded shortly after and there has never been a war between them. Until now, all five villages have been off limits to the outside world, however the gates have been opened and ninja were allowed to travel between. But suddenly, kage are falling ill and no one knows who's behind it. The Hokage and Raikage both lie in comatose state, awaiting an answer as to what put them there.
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Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin]

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1Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin] Empty Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin] Sun Jan 04, 2015 9:59 pm

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Kiri Chunin
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Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin] Shitem10
Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin] Zanget10
Name: Ondori Nara
Nicknames: Rooster
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Clan: Nara
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin

Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin] Looks10
Height: 5`7
Weight: 131lbs
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Description: Ondori is a typical appearing Nara when it comes to the nonchalant almost lazy visage they always uphold. Like the others in his clan, his hair is jet black, but isn't held in a pony tail of any sort and actually has a foreign texture. Wavy and silk, rather than the predominant spiky hair that runs in Nara blood. His hair stops about an inch above his shoulders. His eyes are a piercing topaz and no blemishes or other eye catching traits taint his beautiful face. His clothing consist of a black V-Neck cloak with a hood. Underneath is a fishnet shirt and on the right arm of the cloak there the Nara clan emblem in white. His legs are covered in typical shinobi pants, that meet bandages and shinobi sandals at the shin and on his feet. He sometimes likes to wear traditional japanese wear as well, but the colors usually stay dull and unexpressive. Even the patterns that are emblazoned on the garbs seem to barely catch the eye, just a perk of the ninja. Those that know him well can usually read his mood according to the patterns or colors he wears. Though 99% of the time the colors are deep shades, they often correspond with how he's feeling.

Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin] Person10
Nindo: My Nindo is to not lose myself and what I hold dear to the Shinobi World.
Personality Description: Ondori, like majority of his clan harbors a startling amount of intellect and wisdom. With this strategical mind comes a humble spirit that emits a calming aura that is often felt by those close to him. To those he's not accustomed to Ondori comes off as very reserved. On a normal day he doesn't have much to say anyways, but when around strangers or souls he's not comfortable around, Ondori's presence can be quite uncomfortable. Very analytical, this furthers the uncomfortable air around him when he's around those he deems foreign. One can sometimes feel the Genin's eyes ravaging their body and their habits, from speech patterns, to small nervous gestures or just ones personality. Of course the kid isn't a seer who can read minds and break someone down to the last strand of DNA from a glance, but he damn sure tries and makes sure he knows who he associates with or opens up to.

Extremely modest when it comes to feats he accomplishes, Ondori is also quite the caring spirit. He hates to see people, animals, or sometimes even plant life suffer especially when caused by a greater evil. He has a strong sense of justice, knowing right from wrong, but knowing sometimes you have to to do wrong for the greater good of things. Just because his mind is very moral oriented doesn't mean he acts in favor of good, just that he acknowledges good and bad.

Down to his last nerve, Ondori is very "go with the flow" type person and he'll stick to those guns until he absolutely needs to steer the scenario in another direction or until he explodes in rage. Even when angered however, he usually just comes off as immensely peeved as his voice remains somewhat smooth and moderate in decibels. Along with this go with the flow type persona, Ondori isn't one to ask for things a multitude of times. Three is typically the most amount of times he'll request something and even then it's over a span of long time depending on the severity of the request. When it comes to helping others, he often doesn't like to give away answers or give people the easy way out, instead he likes to make them walk the most rewarding path. Dropping small hints or trying to make them make connections. Ondori enjoys seeing people think and use their brains and sees holding people's hands as damaging to their progression.

Often viewed as a blunt person . . . it's true. The boy is one that rarely sugarcoats things to avoid hurting feelings and he expects the same to be done to him. Not out of disrespect or disregard for people's emotions, but out of respect. He likes to see people improving and doing good and dancing around the truth won't help a person grow. This bluntness also makes him come off as condescending and arrogant at times, but he's just someone who has faith in himself. He won't gas his self up to think he can do the impossible or something highly unlikely, but he knows how to gauge his abilities and approaches task with the appropriate amount of confidence whether it be expressed or not.


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Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin] Backgr10
History: Born and raised in the Nara Compound on the outskirts of Kumogakure, Ondori was named by his drunken father despite his mother's wishes. Rooster is what his name means and it's often what he's called despite his spite of the name. It was evident when he was born that he was going to be a special and slightly odd child due to the alien texture of his hair as opposed to his kin. This factor alone made him one of the fresh batch out of his peers growing up to be sent to Kumogakure to train to become a ninja. This happened at the age of 6 and he and the others still regularly commute to Kumogakure sometimes staying for months at a time. In the ninja academy he didn't really show much promise, he was just seen as your average ninja, not even as a genius, so below average for a Nara. This is when the elder's felt they had discovered what was unique about him . . . he was a failure. Threatened with forced expulsion form his Shinobi studies by the heads of the Nara Compound, Ondori finally kicked it into gear and began to unveil his true potential. It wasn't long after this kick in the rear that the boy made a complete turn around and began his climb to the limelight as a prodigious Genin. Among the batch of Nara sent to Kumogakure to become ninja, Ondori swiftly became the one with the most promise. High intellect, problem solving, critical thinking, and a sound mind that didn't let stress weigh it down, the boy finds it hard to stay modest when he's often patted on the back for his accomplishments.

After becoming a Genin at the age of 10, Ondori took an involuntary break from the Shinobi life after his father passed due to Liver Failure from his excessive alcohol consumption. Along with his older and younger siblings, the children helped keep things running and money coming in the household to provide for their grieving mother. After a year his mother began to come around and soon enough the family's earnings were no longer at a plateau, but were actually on the rise. With his share of the extra rho they were earning Ondori shelled out every last bit of it to find a tutor so he could continue his Shinobi training. Three years of private training with a retired Kumogakure, Ondori's family had finally reached a point where they were financially stable and would be for a long time, so he set out to Kumogakure to once again put on the Cloud Villages headband.
Key Events:
  • Joined Kumogakure Ninja Academy-Age 6
  • Graduated as a Genin of Kumogakure-Age 10
  • Father Passes Away-Age 10
  • Withdraws from all Shinobi Activity to assist family-Age10
  • Begins private Shinobi Training-Age11
  • Permanently moves to Kumogakure and restarts Shinobi Career-Age14

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2Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin] Empty Re: Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin] Sun Jan 04, 2015 10:47 pm

Draygglez

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All good but in your history, your first sentence says born and raised in the Nara compound in the outskirts of kumo. After that, you said he was part of the first batch sent to kumo to train. Was he born in kumo or where? Also, seeing as the Nara clan is from konoha, something has to happen like a reason has to be stated in your history how Nara came to be in kumo like maybe your parents moved or so..

3Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin] Empty Re: Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin] Sun Jan 04, 2015 10:54 pm

Rooster

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Kiri Chunin
Kiri Chunin

Draygglez wrote:All good but in your history, your first sentence says born and raised in the Nara compound in the outskirts of kumo. After that, you said he was part of the first batch sent to kumo to train. Was he born in kumo or where? Also, seeing as the Nara clan is from konoha, something has to happen like a reason has to be stated in your history how Nara came to be in kumo like maybe your parents moved or so..

Outskirts of Kumo, means outside of Kumo, so yah he was sent to Kumo, because he wasn't born in Kumo. He was born outside of it. And as for the Konoha thing, that's what a compound is, it's like a place where a group of peeps settle and set up shop. The fact it's a compound implies they migrated from Konoha before my character was born, etc etc

4Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin] Empty Re: Ondori Nara[Kumogakure Genin] Sun Jan 04, 2015 10:59 pm

Draygglez

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