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It's been five generations after the first war between Samurai and Shinobi. The five villages were founded shortly after and there has never been a war between them. Until now, all five villages have been off limits to the outside world, however the gates have been opened and ninja were allowed to travel between. But suddenly, kage are falling ill and no one knows who's behind it. The Hokage and Raikage both lie in comatose state, awaiting an answer as to what put them there.
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"Hikaru Of The Black Sand" [Kiri/Genin]

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1"Hikaru Of The Black Sand" [Kiri/Genin] Empty "Hikaru Of The Black Sand" [Kiri/Genin] Sun Jan 11, 2015 9:28 pm

Ningyō

Ningyō


"Hikaru Of The Black Sand" [Kiri/Genin] Shitem10
"Hikaru Of The Black Sand" [Kiri/Genin] Image-104
Name: Hikaru, Chikamatsu
Nicknames: "Hikaru Of The Black Sand" "Hikaru The Master Puppet"
Gender: Male
Age: 17 Years Old
Clan:
Chikamatsu:
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin

"Hikaru Of The Black Sand" [Kiri/Genin] Looks10
Height: 5,11
Weight: 146 lbs
Image: "Hikaru Of The Black Sand" [Kiri/Genin] Image-103
Description: Hikaru had wide hazel eyes which he inherited from his mother, and medium, grass green hair which he inherited from his father. He was usually seen with a hazy, dreamy look to his appearance. As a child, Hikaru wore dark green robes with a pale poncho around them. As a teenager, while living in Sunagakure, he wore a purplish robe with the Sunagakure forehead protector around his forehead. After leaving the village and conversing into a puppet body in the likeness of his original body, Hikaru's hair became slightly more messy, and wore his robes along with a purple ring on his left thumb that bears the kanji for "jewel" or "sphere". He also wore teal nail polish on his fingernails. Even though Hikaru still possessed his Sunagakure forehead protector that was slashed out in the middle, he kept it on his person instead of wearing it.

"Hikaru Of The Black Sand" [Kiri/Genin] Person10
Nindo: "For my name to be known all the way down to a kid like you… is an honour"
Personality Description: Hikaru grew up in a sad and lonely environment due to the absence of parental love. When introduced to the art of puppetry by his grandmother, Iko, he grew a little happier. He eventually created puppets in the likeness of his parents, but when he realized that the puppets couldn't give him the actual love that he desired, he became cold and aloof. This led to his maintaining little regard for human life. Hikaru even went so far as to state that he would feel nothing if Iko died, as he claimed that his heart had become like his puppet body: without any emotions. Despite his cruel and nihilistic nature, Hikaru was also known to possess a very down-to-earth outlook on life, rarely getting worked up over obstacles that impeded his way. He rarely gave way to any strong emotions, and such instances that happened were often short-lived.

Hikaru was also known for his impatience, as he repeatedly noted that he did not wish to wait or keep others waiting. Despite this, he took his time in battling Sora when they first met due to his interest in fighting his old creations, handed down to a puppet master of the next generation.

Hikaru and his second partner in his village, Kaji, both had conflicting views on art, and they frequently argued about their differing perspectives. Kaji maintained his belief that art was something transient that departs quickly, where as Hikaru believed that fine art was everlasting and remained far into the future.
Favorites:

  • -Human Puppets
  • -Doing Things Quickly
  • -Art


"Hikaru Of The Black Sand" [Kiri/Genin] Backgr10
History: When Hikaru was young, his father and mother were killed by Sakumo Hatake in battle, leaving him in the care of his grandmother, Iko. When Iko attempted to cheer him up by teaching him puppetry at age five, Hikaru's innate aptitude for the art became apparent, and he even began to devise masterful ways of eliminating a puppet master's weaknesses in battle. His skills even allowed him to create two puppets in the image of his parents in an attempt to discard the terrible loneliness he felt. However, as the puppets were unable to give him the real parental love that he desired, Hikaru lost interest in them, and they later fell into Iko's possession. Hikaru created many other ingenious puppets, including Kuroari, Karasu, and Sanshōuo, which were later owned by Kaike. During the a Shinobi war, the effectiveness of his puppets in spilling enemies' blood on the sand gave rise to Hikaru's moniker "Hikaru of the Black Sand". However, motivated by his desire to make works that last forever, Hikaru began experimenting to create puppets out of people. his only friend, Komushi, lost his right arm during his border control duty, so Hikaru gave him a new puppet arm. After Komushi perished, having accidentally ingested some of Hikaru's poison, Hikaru proceeded to turn him into one of his first human puppets.

Three years before leaving Sunagakure at age fifteen. About a years later, he secretly killed the a Genin and made him into one of his human puppets. At some point thinking of turning himself into a human puppet in order to increase his own offensive capabilities and prolong his life, he was confronted by Ruka who offered him a battle for her body. He responded by battling her to which he lost in the end, as he always remembered her every time he was in a problematic situation. As he found Kumo.

As he found Kumo and joined the village. Him as a genin was a good idea to make it to Chunnin, then spec jounin and jounin in this village then become a ronin. Of course he did some missions and helping out until the day came out and he had to leave. At the mean time Hikaru help out the village a lot and even joined a squad to be a bit more useful and see how everyone did there things. Still wanting to turn into a human puppet was going to wait for a later time, being part of this village wouldn't allow such and act and he knew he wasn't ready to betray this village at this rank a bit later when time was right his art for eternity had to wait a bit long.
Key Events:

  • Hikaru's Parents Died
  • Hikaru started to love kugutsu
  • Hikaru's first friend died of his poison
  • Hikaru leaves Sunagakure
  • Hikaru finds Kumogakure

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Last edited by Ningyō on Sun Jan 18, 2015 10:47 pm; edited 6 times in total

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You cannot make a missing Ninja.

You are only allowed to start at Genin, because this is your alt.

Ningyō

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Bump

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Denied, you have a character in Kirigakure.

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There

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Hikaru puppet body consisted of a pair of spinning claws attached to his lower back, a holder for four scrolls on his back, a stinger in the empty and open stomach cavity, a compartment in his right chest, and a 'core of living flesh' in the left which had the kanji for "scorpion" painted on it. In his exposed state, Hikaru eyes would also be wide open in a maniacal way, as opposed to his normal calm looking eyes.

Honestly, you shouldn't even be starting as a human puppet as a genin, much less even a puppet with mods.

Remove this.

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Even though Hikaru still possessed his Sunagakure forehead protector that was slashed out in the middle, he kept it on his person instead of wearing it.
Either you have your village headband, or you don't. pick.

When Hikaru was young, his father and mother were killed by Sakumo Hatake in battle, leaving him in the care of his grandmother, Iko. When Iko attempted to cheer him up by teaching him puppetry at age five, Hikaru's innate aptitude for the art became apparent, and he even began to devise masterful ways of eliminating a puppet master's weaknesses in battle. His skills even allowed him to create two puppets in the image of his parents in an attempt to discard the terrible loneliness he felt. However, as the puppets were unable to give him the real parental love that he desired, Hikaru lost interest in them, and they later fell into Iko's possession. Hikaru created many other ingenious puppets, including Kuroari, Karasu, and Sanshōuo, which were later owned by Kaike. During the a Shinobi war, the effectiveness of his puppets in spilling enemies' blood on the sand gave rise to Hikaru's moniker "Hikaru of the Black Sand". However, motivated by his desire to make works that last forever, Hikaru began experimenting to create puppets out of people. his only friend, Komushi, lost his right arm during his border control duty, so Hikaru gave him a new puppet arm. After Komushi perished, having accidentally ingested some of Hikaru's poison, Hikaru proceeded to turn him into one of his first human puppets.

Three years before leaving Sunagakure at age fifteen. About a years later, he secretly killed the a Genin and made him into one of his human puppets. At some point thinking of turning himself into a human puppet in order to increase his own offensive capabilities and prolong his life, he was confronted by Ruka who offered him a battle for her body. He responded by battling her to which he lost in the end, as he always remembered her every time he was in a problematic situation. As he found Kumo.

As he found Kumo and joined the village. Him as a genin was a good idea to make it to Chunnin, then spec jounin and jounin in this village then become a ronin. Of course he did some missions and helping out until the day came out and he had to leave. At the mean time Hikaru help out the village a lot and even joined a squad to be a bit more useful and see how everyone did there things. Still wanting to turn into a human puppet was going to wait for a later time, being part of this village wouldn't allow such and act and he knew he wasn't ready to betray this village at this rank a bit later when time was right his art for eternity had to wait a bit long.

Quite honestly, i stopped half way through that. I counted 3 human puppets, and ceased my reading. You are trying to get away with way too much here for a genin. Not to mention that your history is almost an exact copy of your personality. On top of that, you say you ranked up? Yeah, no. You're genin. You started Genin, you were always genin.

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Achieve this Garbage

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