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It's been five generations after the first war between Samurai and Shinobi. The five villages were founded shortly after and there has never been a war between them. Until now, all five villages have been off limits to the outside world, however the gates have been opened and ninja were allowed to travel between. But suddenly, kage are falling ill and no one knows who's behind it. The Hokage and Raikage both lie in comatose state, awaiting an answer as to what put them there.
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1Denki Clan  Empty Denki Clan Tue Jan 20, 2015 11:26 pm

Osaka

Osaka
Suna Special Jonin
Suna Special Jonin

Denki Clan  28vylqf
Denki Clan  Jutsu11
Clan Name: Denki Clan
Clan Unique Features: Both clan share the blond hair trait, Denki clan members are distinguished by there Blue eyes and height at a certain age they grow up to 6,6 feet tall. Members are born with the symbol of there clan permanently crafted in there palms.

  • -Lightning Attacks 10% More Damage
  • -Move at Basic Taijutsu speed without Taijutsu.

Clan History:
Spoiler:
Clan Members:


Denki Clan  Kekki10
KKG Name: Denki Clan  2z54rdg Voltage Release (高圧遁 Kōatsuton; Viz "Voltage Style")
KKG Description: The general capability of the nature is the ability to conjure extremely condensed, small bolts of electricity that are able to be manipulated through the brain waves at a literal speed of lightning, as they are not being held down by the user's body or chakra. The bolts can be combined into a single, slightly larger bolt to provide more destructive power, or can be coated onto the user's hand(s) to allow a physical slashing capability. As the electricity is generally a super-charged variant of Lightning, it can incinerate, pierce, or destroy virtually any matter, with an exception of some extremely high caliber objects and people. The general manipulation of this Advance Element is similar to that of a remote control aeroplane: wireless movement by using chakra as the remote. Voltage Release sparks can also conjoin with the electromagnetic fields in the area, allowing the user to generate a controllable volt from anywhere in the vicinity, or spur a sudden discharge in a certain point of the fields, resulting in an explosion.

Denki Clan  Jutsu12

Name: Volt Release: Volt Zero
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kōatsuton
Range: 50 M.
Duration: Two Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Clap Hands
Description: This technique is used for both defensively and offensively maneuvers. The user will clap both hands together as the voltage will start to releases in there hands. Once the user had released enough voltage static he will separate both hands from each other a bit showing a gap between both hands as static will pass from on palm to the other. The user will bend his fingers forming a circle as the voltage will turn into a sphere that is 10 inches big and wide, then the user will raise there hands into the sky and slam there palms to the ground releasing massive voltage there the ground destroying the area in a radius of 50 meters anything touching the ground for two post will be in shock and get seriously electrified.
Weakness: This technique takes a post to make so gives the opponent a fighting chance.

Name: High Voltage Impact
Rank: S
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Kōatsuton
Range: Point Blank
Duration: One Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Clap Hands
Description: The user utilizes this move by clapping his hands together this releases the lighting in his body to release an surround there body like an armor but it doesn't protect the user it give him the ability to move faster. As the user is indulge with this voltage around him he can break or almost break the “8 Forbidden Gate Barrier” moving at gate one, to a distance of 0 meters to 15 meters. Once he attacks he sends a single punch and all the voltage from his body goes to the single attack surrounding the arm. Once he makes contact he will send the target flying 30 meters crashing with anything in its path. This technique can kill if punched in the heart or brain.
Weakness: This technique uses to much chakra. It can cause fatigue for two post.

Name: Volt Release: Volt Crash
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kōatsuton
Range: 10 M.
Duration: Keepable
Hand Seals/Charge up: Ram, Snake, Clap Hands
Description: This technique will indulge the user into a sphere of high density voltage that will surround him as a Shield and act like a weapon. After the user has clap his hands together he will release voltage release around his body that protects him from incoming attacks and he decides to attack he can dash at his target and crash the sphere that surround him at the target electrocuting the target and slamming him into a surface.
Weakness: This technique take massive chakra to contain each post.



Last edited by Osaka on Fri Jan 23, 2015 9:00 pm; edited 12 times in total

2Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Wed Jan 21, 2015 12:20 am

Draygglez

Draygglez
Kumo Anbu
Kumo Anbu

I dunno if this is allowed. But still, the clan abilities are much like uzumaki in the sense that uzumakis receive. +25 to chakra and +1 to fuinjutsu. That need be changed and you need to explain how they learn elements faster like is there a wc reduction or what.

3Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Wed Jan 21, 2015 12:39 am

Osaka

Osaka
Suna Special Jonin
Suna Special Jonin

Alright lowered the chakra increased to 15% change it to Ninjutsu and 100 word reduction for elements if thats to much then ill go to 50 word reduction

4Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Wed Jan 21, 2015 12:48 am

Guest

Anonymous
Guest

Ok, so you're getting an Advanced Release AND perks?

No. You need to put a lot more effort into this clan. Less than 150 for history is not going to cut it.

5Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Thu Jan 22, 2015 3:18 am

Osaka

Osaka
Suna Special Jonin
Suna Special Jonin

Bump

6Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Thu Jan 22, 2015 3:39 am

Kidbushido

Kidbushido

Well let's start with the fact that you have an advanced release (which is pretty strong) and other bonuses. You can keep one bonus if you keep Dark Release. Excluding the +1 to Ninjutsu.

7Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Thu Jan 22, 2015 3:41 am

Osaka

Osaka
Suna Special Jonin
Suna Special Jonin

Bump

8Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Thu Jan 22, 2015 5:52 am

Kidbushido

Kidbushido

Name: Dark Release: Inhaling Maw
Rank: A Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Meiton
Range: 10 M.
Duration: 2 Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Ram, Tiger
Description: Hiruko uses this technique through his mark in order to forcibly extract the physical and spiritual energy of another ninja, even from a considerable distance. He can absorb the chakra into either the upper square of the mark on his left hand or his mouth. He is able to completely remove the victim's chakra, potentially causing death.
After using this ability, Hiruko is able to detect their natural elemental affinity, and then freely manipulate the victim's chakra element and perform ninjutsu of that element. This allows him to deconstruct and learn the abilities of his opponents, and he can presumably utilise all forms of nature transformation as a result.
Weakness: Cannot use advance element threw this technique, Only regular Chakra element.

There's no way you'll be allowed to absorb all the chakra from someone's body using any technique on this site unless it's over time. Also, the most you'll be able to do with jutsu from this clan is absorb chakra and MAYBE absorb a technique. Stealing elements or stuff like that is out of the question.

9Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Thu Jan 22, 2015 12:46 pm

Osaka

Osaka
Suna Special Jonin
Suna Special Jonin

Alright i made changes to the technique hope is better of anything ill just take that out

10Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Fri Jan 23, 2015 12:30 am

Loki

Loki
Kumo Genin
Kumo Genin

Name: Devouring Barrier Sphere Trap
Rank: D-S
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: Meiton
Range: 5 M.
Duration: Keepable
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description: At some point, the user of this technique will set up a barrier seal , which camouflaged by surroundings. If the target is not aware from the camouflaged seal, the presence of the target will ignite the trap automatically. Once activated, a dark red chakra sphere formed, caged the target inside. Anyone caught in the trap as it trapped will be compressed in its container, devoured, and drain there chakra slowly 5% each post.
Weakness: Depending on its rank the user can destroy it with an Attack.

Explain more and weakness and how its destroyed and how large the 'trap' seal is etc.

11Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Fri Jan 23, 2015 12:33 am

Guest

Anonymous
Guest

Alright, let me stop you right here.

You're basing this of http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hiruko_(missing-nin) Now that is all and well, until you start throwing Chimera techs, which is a title, as seen : https://shinobigaiden.rpg-board.net/t6-titles

Now absorbing Chakra? Cool sure.... but if you're going to null chakra, you aren't getting anywhere with is. You're taking chakra and copying it, essentially copying KKG which is not allowed.

Now if you want Chimera, go join https://shinobigaiden.rpg-board.net/t845-kiseimu-clan

But this clan? Yeah, this would get approved the way it is. You'll have to do a complete 360 with this.
Osaka wrote:Denki Clan  Jutsu11
Clan Name: Hiruko Clan
Clan Unique Features: All Members of the clan have black or white hair with green to blue eyes. In there palms they have a mark a symbol of there power, is two diamonds touching each other the bottom one covering the top one and the top is slightly bigger then the bottom one.

  • Chakra Increase 15%

Clan History: About 200 years ago a young man known as Hiruko was the only person known to use Meiton. He was a strong young man and had a dark future ahead of him but as many people he had a soft spot and a young girl named Asuna was thought the art of shape release. She learn this ability and lived her life using it. She meet a young man named Otaku and they felt in loved as few years later they had a child that child was born with that ability and mark in there palms. A few years later many people where born with that mark in there hands and ability to use Meiton it became a clan known as the first person that knew about it Hiruko. In the four great war a few members of the Huroku clan help out take down Madara Uchiha & Obito Uchiha. Many of them where of great help, after the war the members of the clan started to scattered around all the five great nation an the miner nations as well. 150 years ago a member of the Hiroku clan bagame power hungry and when in a war with all the minor villages killing and draining there chakra and got himself  killed with many followers of him. The clan was in a hunt down to kill each living member so no more power hungry people could be born again. 100 years later after all members where almost killed a few got to live by hiding from the law and hiding a young woman became an Anbu Captain of konoha and showed everyone that her clan wasn't the clan they expected it to be. She gave a speech and help out minor villages live a good life, then a young man about 50 years ago became a Tsuchikage and made Iwagakure one of the most safes villages known at the time having Kiri, Kumo & Konoha as allies. Then got killed by a Suna missin-nin, then about 35 years ago man know as Kamido was transplanted with a virus that devours chakra. The Virus is called SCP-001 but this clan has so much chakra and the ability to gain chakra that the virus became a special transformation of the body. This was passed down to very rarely members.
Clan Members:

  • ~


Denki Clan  Kekki10
KKG Name: The Dark Release (冥遁, Meiton; Viz "Shade Style")
KKG Description: The Dark Release  is a specialised nature transformation kekkei genkai that can be used to absorb, manipulate, and release chakra taken from an opponent. Hiruko used techniques of this nature through a mark on his left hand. This mark resembles two diamonds, one overlapping the other. Chakra is absorbed through the upper square, while it is released and manipulated through the lower. It is unknown what elements this nature entails. To date, this form of nature manipulation has only been used by Hiruko and does from its clan, who obtained it by birth. The clan member are good Fuinjutsu user and can absorb chakra from a good distance as well. They can easily learn new elements faster than other people thanks to there mark allows the user to manipulate it, at a faster manner and quicker time. Because they can absorb chakra there body can handle extra chakra in there body they are like a walking Chakra jar. Also has the SCP-001 is a Bio-Fusion that the clans goes threw, after 35 years of the virus being around the body of the Hiruko clan body the virus became more like another Kekkei Genkai.

Denki Clan  Jutsu12

Denki Clan  Jutsu10

Name: Dark Release: Inhaling Maw
Rank: A Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Meiton
Range: 10 M.
Duration: 4 Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Ram, Tiger
Description: Hiruko uses this technique through his mark in order to forcibly extract the physical and spiritual energy of another ninja, even from a considerable distance. He can absorb the chakra into either the upper square of the mark on his left hand or his mouth. He is able to completely remove the victim's chakra, only after the victim is death.
After using this ability, Hiruko is able to detect their natural elemental affinity, and then freely manipulate the victim's chakra element and perform one technique of that element. This allows him to deconstruct and learn the abilities of his opponents, and he can presumably utilize one  forms of nature transformation as a result. This take a process of 4 post to absorb all the chakra of a user.
Weakness:can only be used after a target is death.

Name: Dark Release: Judgment
Rank: C Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Meiton
Range: 15 M.
Duration: 1 Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Dragon
Description: Hiruko converts the chakra absorbed from the Dark Release: Inhaling Maw technique into light blue flames, turning it back on his enemies with amplified strength to blow them away. The flames are expelled through the lower square of the mark in Hiruko's left hand.
Weakness: Can be counter by C rank water attack.

Name: Devouring Barrier Sphere Trap
Rank: D-S
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: Meiton
Range: 5 M.
Duration: Keepable
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description: At some point, the user of this technique will set up a barrier seal , which camouflaged by surroundings. If the target is not aware from the camouflaged seal, the presence of the target will ignite the trap automatically. Once activated, a dark red chakra sphere formed, caged the target inside. Anyone caught in the trap as it trapped will be compressed in its container, devoured, and drain there chakra slowly 5% each post.
Weakness: Depending on its rank the user can destroy it with an Attack.

Name: SCP-001
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: ~
Range: Self
Duration: Keepable
Hand Seals/Charge up: Remove Chains
Description: A virus that was transplanted into this clan as a curse. After a few years of the virus being around the users body, the virus became a Bio-Fusion. This slowly turn the right or left arm of the user into a Reddish like wooden arm. With spikes all over the arm and the fingers become Sharp like blades. The arm is suppressed by chakra chain that surrounds the users arm, once they are off the arm will increased the users strength and speed only to that arm. All Meiton technique cause double its power and drain chakra twice faster.
Weakness:

  • -D Rank 1k Word Count
  • -C Rank 2K Word Count
  • -B Rank 3K Word Count
  • -A Rank 4K Word Count
  • -S Rank 5K Word Count

12Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Fri Jan 23, 2015 11:09 am

Osaka

Osaka
Suna Special Jonin
Suna Special Jonin

Bump new clan ^^ Hope this one is a lot better and faster to approve

13Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Fri Jan 23, 2015 12:37 pm

Guest

Anonymous
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KKG Description: The general capability of the nature is the ability to conjure extremely condensed, small bolts of electricity that are able to be manipulated through the air waves at a literal speed of sound, lightning, and light, as they are not being held down by the user's body or chakra. The bolts can be combined into a single, slightly larger bolt to provide more destructive power, or can be coated onto the user's hand(s) to allow a physical slashing capability. As the electricity is generally a super-charged variant of Lightning, it can incinerate, pierce, or destroy virtually any matter, with an exception of some extremely high caliber objects and people. The general manipulation of this Advanced element is similar to that of a remote control aeroplane: wireless movement by using chakra as the remote. Voltage Release sparks can also conjoin with the electromagnetic fields in the area, allowing the user to generate a controllable bolt from anywhere in the vicinity, or spur a sudden discharge in a certain point of the fields, resulting in an explosion. Another usage of the Advanced Element, other than it being a more powerful electrical medium, is the ability to create extremely low frequency and similarly low voltage bolts that, when entered into a corpse's body, can be used to trigger certain parts of it's brain. By doing so, the user can make the body perform basic tasks, such as moving, talking, etc. This is very effective for mental trauma and infiltration missions, but after a certain amount of time, the electrical charges in the brain will burn out, and the Shinobi will lose control of the dead body. Corpses that have already been possessed are unable to be done so to again. There speed is amazingly fast there high potential body can go up to massive speed almost breaking “Forbidden Gates” barrier.

This whole description is wack. Either you have some Blaze Equivalent of lightning or don't bother. It sounds like you're trying to recreate your light release while trying to make some Sound Release that passes mach 12.

In short, lower the description on this KKG.

14Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Fri Jan 23, 2015 12:59 pm

Osaka

Osaka
Suna Special Jonin
Suna Special Jonin

Because Kaseki think it was Wack i changed it for him

15Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Fri Jan 23, 2015 2:40 pm

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Anonymous
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Denki Clan  Jutsu11
Clan Name: Denki Clan 
Clan Unique Features: Members of this clan are mistaken by members of the Yamanaka clan. Both clan share the blond hair trait, Denki clan members are distinguished by there Blue eyes and height at a certain age they grow up to 6,6 feet tall. Members are born with the symbol of there clan permanently crafted in there palms. 

  • -Lightning Attacks cause more damage

  • -Move at Basic Taijutsu speed without Taijutsu. 

  • -Immune To B and Lower Lighting Technique. 




Need I say it?

I was intedending doing KKG, Features, then Jutsu... but now you force me to move out of my plan.

Immunity : Absolutely not.
Tai Speed Boost : So you start off at Basic tai speeds? Sure. Why not?
damage Increase: Uhm... like how much?
"Members of this clan are mistaken by members of the Yamanaka clan." : remove it.

Also grammar. There,Their, they're.
Figure it out, yo.

16Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Fri Jan 23, 2015 7:38 pm

Osaka

Osaka
Suna Special Jonin
Suna Special Jonin

Bump

17Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Fri Jan 23, 2015 8:17 pm

Guest

Anonymous
Guest

KKG Description: An advanced element that can increase speed and lighting attacks by twice its power . Voltage release its lighting compressed to a zero pressure that turn the lighting release to a more heavy and stronger element. Members of the Denki clan are immune to lighting attacks B rank and under techniques. There body has become so use to the high voltage there speed increased rapidly master Taijutsu from there clan have been mistaking of using Body Flick thats how fast they are. Capable of totally destroy the brain and nerve system with a technique to the head or heart. Also can bring dead people to life with a technique of high voltage for a period of time.

I think you know what needs to be removed...

18Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Fri Jan 23, 2015 8:24 pm

Osaka

Osaka
Suna Special Jonin
Suna Special Jonin

Hopefuly i took out the right thing :\

19Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Fri Jan 23, 2015 8:32 pm

Guest

Anonymous
Guest

KKG Description: An advanced element that can increase speed and lighting attacks by twice its power . Voltage release its lighting compressed to a zero pressure that turn the lighting release to a more heavy and stronger element. Members of the Denki clan are immune to lighting attacks B rank and under techniques. There body has become so use to the high voltage there speed increased rapidly master Taijutsu from there clan have been become extremely fast. Capable of totally destroy the brain and nerve system with a technique to the head or heart. Also can bring dead people to life with a technique of high voltage for a period of time.

remove.
Grammar
Grammar
Grammar
Remove

20Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Fri Jan 23, 2015 9:01 pm

Osaka

Osaka
Suna Special Jonin
Suna Special Jonin

Bump

21Denki Clan  Empty Re: Denki Clan Fri Jan 23, 2015 9:06 pm

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Anonymous
Guest

Approving this for now.

Seems good to go, might have to unapprove this to clear some things up in the future.

But...
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